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Roy Peter Clark
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Pimp My Writing: When Journalists Use Archetypes
How two ancient story forms dominate popular and political culture in America -- and what journalists can learn from them. 

Years ago, I worked with a high school student who had written a story for the school paper about a wheelchair bowling league. A group of students met with the bowlers and had the chance to see what it was like to overcome a disability. The student wrote a short but inspiring story about the triumph of the human spirit.

Later, she revealed to a class that it had been a horrible experience for all the students at the bowling alley. Some of the wheelchair bowlers were cranky, dismissive, angry, horny, obnoxious. I asked why she hadn't written that. "I wanted to write a good story," she said, "about people overcoming obstacles."

The idea that all people in wheelchairs who bowl are noble is what Don Murray would call a "cliché of vision," a distorted picture of reality based on the requirements of a story form. Tool #38 in the book "Writing Tools" advises writers to "Prefer archetypes to stereotypes." But even archetypes can be dangerous.

In this essay, I will explore two such archetypal story forms. Together they represent the yin and yang of American storytelling, with profound implications for how we come to understand our world.

I'm not sure when it hit me. Perhaps it was during an episode of the reality TV show "The Swan." The grotesque premise, you may remember, involved taking a group of women who suffered from physical deformities and, through extensive reconstructive and cosmetic surgery, transforming their ugliness into beauty. If that wasn't bad enough, the women were paraded through a competition to earn the crown of the fairest swan of all.

This show was the most transparent example of the use and abuse of an ancient story form, one that precedes its popularization by Hans Christian Andersen. That story, of course, known to children the world over, is "The Ugly Duckling." In its purest version, the story is about patience and persistence, a lesson that one's early condition need not become destiny.

For reasons I don't quite understand, "The Ugly Duckling" has become the dominant story form of American popular culture, especially so-called "reality" television shows, perhaps because the narrative fits snugly into a celebrity culture in which every person dreams of being a star.

  • Think of the ways in which "American Idol" has dominated the entertainment industry. Consider how character story lines generate interest in the show. Yes, Simon, it is a singing competition. But it helps that Kelly Clarkson was a cocktail waitress in Texas, that Fantasia was a single mom, that Taylor Hicks sang in college bars and honky tonks.

  • A more subtle example, but proof of the pervasive power of the form, can be found in the 11-year PBS series "Antiques Roadshow." Folks line up at regional antiques fairs to have their old stuff appraised. First, the owner tells a story about how the object was obtained: "It's been in our attic since Aunt Bessie died in 1959." Or, better still, "I bought it at a garage sale for $30." Then the expert tells the story of the provenance of the antique and opines: "Would it surprise you to learn that this ashtray would go conservatively at auction for $30,000? That $30 was a good investment." The piece of junk is now treasure, the duckling a swan.

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The recurrence of the ugly duckling story would be no more than an annoyance if that bird had not managed to flap its wings into American politics. It turns out that, whatever their personal stories, American political figures need to establish their duckling credibility (call it "duck-cred" for short) in order to qualify for swan status in the eyes of gullible voters. In other words, Lincoln probably cursed American politics forever by being born in a log cabin.

When Bill Clinton ran for president, he could not present himself to voters as an egg-headed, draft-dodging, womanizing Yale graduate and Rhodes Scholar. He had to become the Man from Hope, Ark., the aspiring son of a bad daddy and a troubled mother. Stories don't work unless there are obstacles to overcome. Even political figures with billions of dollars of personal wealth must reveal their humble origins, or their immigrant roots.

During the last presidential campaign, Stephen Colbert, as I recall, satirized this tendency by declaring his own suitability for high office as the son of French "goat turd farmers."

It turns out that for every story there is a counter story. For every build-me-up story, there is a tear-me-down narrative. It turns out that the antidote to "The Ugly Duckling" is another ancient story form, "The Emperor's New Clothes."

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In the various versions of this old tale, a group of con men fool the emperor by displaying to him the most beautiful cloth in the world, ready to be woven into the most splendid garment. But only the truly worthy can see it. So the emperor falls into the trap, not wanting to reveal his unworthiness, and parades through the town thinking his body is magnificently draped, only to be humiliated by a little child who calls attention to his nakedness.

As political candidates build themselves up from squalor, truth squads on the other side shout that they are wearing no clothes. The greatest example, perhaps in history, is the Swift Vets and POWs for Truth campaign against John Kerry. Having portrayed himself as a Vietnam-era war hero, Kerry faced a group of detractors determined to tear down his story, to show that he was unworthy of wearing the garments of a true hero and patriot.

In the coming months, journalists will encounter competing stories about the presidential candidates. Are they swans, or are they naked? Is Rudy Giuliani America's mayor, a hero of Sept. 11, or someone, in the counter narrative, responsible for his city's vulnerability? Is John Edwards an advocate for the common person or an unscrupulous ambulance chaser?

That's the problem with ancient story forms. They have strict requirements that force us to select some details but reject others. Real life -- unlike reality television -- is not scripted and staged. In real life, the swan was pretty cute as a duckling, and the emperor may not be dressed in gold, but at least he's wearing a golf shirt and Bermuda shorts.

"Use archetypes," argues Tom French, "just don't let them use you."

Posted by Roy Peter Clark at 11:20 AM on Jun. 7, 2007
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counterexamples These are useful ideas, but could you provide some counterexamples... More.
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