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8:02 AM  Nov. 29, 2006
Civil War and Civil Language: Word Choice and the Newsroom
By Roy Peter Clark (More articles by this author)
Senior Scholar, Poynter Institute

Today's debate is on the use of "civil war" to describe the struggles in Iraq. News organizations such as the Los Angeles Times and NBC News have begun to include that phrase in their reporting. Other news organizations remain in a holding pattern with terms such as "sectarian violence." Tony Snow, speaking for the Bush administration, insists that "civil war" overstates and mischaracterizes the nature of the violence on the ground.
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So what is a responsible editor to do?

The answer will be easier when we realize that the responsible choice of words is one of the most important and common challenges in American politics and journalism. Consider these phrases:

  • pro-choice vs. pro-life vs. pro-abortion vs. anti-abortion

  • illegal alien vs. illegal immigrant vs. undocumented worker

  • refugee vs. evacuee

  • invasion vs. incursion vs. police action

  • prisoner of war vs. enemy combatant

  • Islamo-fascist vs. jihadist vs. terrorist vs. Muslim fanatic vs. Iraqi insurgent

The weight of these choices falls heavily upon the journalist, as it should. For in politics, each term carries ideological meaning, even as it appears to the world in the sheep's clothing of impartiality. My terrorist, as they say, is your freedom fighter.

In politics, each term carries ideological meaning, even as it appears to the world in the sheep's clothing of impartiality.George Orwell argues that political abuse and language abuse together form the double helix of government corruption and tyranny. "In our time," wrote Orwell after World War II, "political speech and writing are largely the defense of the indefensible. Things like the continuance of British rule in India, the Russian purges and deportations, the dropping of the atom bombs on Japan, can indeed be defended, but only by arguments which are too brutal for most people to face, and which do not square with the professed aims of political parties."

The corrupt create language, argued Orwell, that softens or veils the truth through euphemism or abstraction: "Defenseless villages are bombarded from the air, the inhabitants driven out in the countryside, the cattle machine-gunned, the huts set on fire with incendiary bullets: this is called pacification.... Such phraseology is needed if one wants to name things without calling up mental pictures of them."

The political language of our own time has mutated a bit from what Orwell read and heard. Today, the debate is framed by simple phrases, repeated so often to stay "on message," that they turn into slogans, another substitute for critical thinking. So one side wants to "stay the course" without settling for the "status quo," and condemns political opponents who want to "cut and run."

It is one job of the journalist to avoid the trap of repeating catch phrases, such as "the war on terror," disguised as arguments, and to help the public navigate the great distances between "stay the course" and "cut and run." Surely, they are not the only options.

It is one job of the journalist to avoid the trap of repeating catch phrases ... and to help the public navigate the great distances between "stay the course" and "cut and run."Which gets us back to "civil war." The phrase itself is odd, almost an oxymoron. All other denotations and connotations of "civil" are positive, the antithesis of war. We long for "civility" in speech and behavior, which is a sign of a "civilization."

The phrase is almost ancient. One early use in English, dated 1387, describes the "battle civil" between two Roman factions. Shakespeare uses the word "civil" at the opening of "Romeo and Juliet" to describe the violence between the Capulets and the Montagues. And the exact phrase "civil war" appears in 1649 to describe the struggle between the British Parliament and King Charles I.

We should also remember that the American Civil War was once called the "War Between the States," which seems neutral when compared with the contentious language of North and South that created the "War of the Rebellion" versus the "War of Secession." We should remember that many terms we take for granted were applied retrospectively by historians or other experts. (I explained to someone just today how I -- ignorant of the term "The Great War" -- always marveled at the prescience of those who named World War I, knowing that a Second World War was sure to come along.)

But as long as we journalists remain scribblers of the first rough draft of history, we learn to settle. Our job is to find language that describes the world accurately but in a non-partisan and -- as my young friend Pat Walters reminds me -- efficient way.

Our job is to find language that describes the world accurately but in a non-partisan and ... efficient way.So, while "illegal alien" turns people into criminal Martians, so "undocumented workers" seeks to veil their illegal status. Which leads many journalists to "illegal immigrants," a compromise that seems clear, efficient, and, from my limited perspective, non-partisan. Others will and should disagree.

Which leads me to this conclusion:

Journalists should avoid the widespread and unreflective use of the term "civil war." To use it is to play into the hands of those who would de-certify the press by framing us as against our government and American interests abroad. More important, "civil war" is too vague an abstraction to describe all that is happening on the ground in Iraq. The violence comes from Americans, from civilians, from militia, from various Muslim sects (against foreigners and each other), from mercenaries, from criminal gangs, from foreign jihadists. It is less the job of the foreign correspondent to summarize information in abstract language than to report in concrete and specific terms on what is happening.

The reporters in Iraq are, to my mind, men and women of great physical and moral courage, performing one of democracy's precious duties -- to observe the war as closely as possible -- and to report it back to those of us who claim to govern ourselves. If those observations conflict with government claims, so be it. We'll argue the definitions back home, and the news media here can cover that, too.

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Civil War and Racism
The discussion of "civil war" in Iraq skirts another issue, racism. It seems that despite different ethnic, religious and territorial origins, the use of 'civil war' shows a racist attitude by many US based reporters and newsrooms. The war in Iraq (thank you Australia) is complex beyond understanding. There are...
James Rattan, 3:19 AM February 8, 2007
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